· The audience wants to see the plot of the film more.
· We need to show how Alice has died, in a car crash.
· We need to introduce my character more, the drug dealer.
· We need to make it clear Rob has turned to drugs, through his depression.
· The audience wants a voice over to explain the film.
· A voice over during the beginning scene with Rob.
We can show Rob’s depression and that my character is a drug dealer by a scene where the two of us meet and I take him to ‘Wonderland’.
We could explain the storyline more and show Alice has died in a car crash with a voice over at the beginning of the film.
We will do more editing to show that the drugs have taken Will to ‘Wonderland’ where he can see Alice again.
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